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 Every student can benefit from engaging in extracurricular activities. Students can have experiences that they can't have during the regular classes. For example, students can learn about new subjects, such as learning new foreign languages.Since students use their extra time, they can study efficiently and effectively. Also, students can learn about special skills including dancing in a social club and cooking. These new kinds of learning help students find their potentials and get their future plan which fits them better. Moreover, students can enjoy their hobbies through the extracurriculum activities like climbing a mountain and taking photos. Through the activities, students can have fun and develop themselves at the same time. Since there are lots of various advantages, students should engage in many extracurricular activities.